this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account. good story.

I really liked it alot it was a great story.

Whoa...It's kinda sad, cuz Will died in it. But when I got to the part where Christian was fighting by himself in the corridors, I knew Will was going to die later on. At the same time it was a good story, and one of the best series ever.

Okay, I read about the first hundred words of this, before deciding I need to review as I read so that you can fully appreciate your epicness.

To start with;

'Why did you have to pull your sword on him?'

See I know that this is a serious line, in a serious scene, but we discussed this in Physics and you can probably guess exactly what I was thinking *vbg*

'I'll be dying for something I believe in.'

'What's that?'

'Narnia'

SQUE!

'It's ME you prat!'

You have no idea how much I'm bouncing purely because you used the word prat :):):)

YAY, CHRISTIAN CAME TO HELP!

'Yes, your royal prattiness'

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'Welcome home.'

Oh. My. God. I actually thought you killed Will. And Christian. And I was slightly tearful.

BUT THEN THEY GOT INTO THE REAL NARNIA :):) AND THEY'LL LIVE HAPPILY EVER EVER AFTER AND I CAN WATCH THEM THROUGH MY SLASH GOGGLES YES?

Absolutely brilliant :)

I am putting this fic into the community Closets in Narnia.

Great story with a very detailed and intricate plot.

Amazing spy angle and cleverly done.

What a tale! You have dry wit and humor, angst, suspense, drama and the whole thing wrapped into one!

This was a very enjoyable read. Loved it!