|Reviews for Love and War|
| the Moon our Witness 5/19/13 . chapter 5
soo I really would like to know what happens next! are you still updating?
| the Moon our Witness 5/19/13 . chapter 1
I just finished reading chapter 1 and it seems really fun so far(:
I noticed a few spelling mistakes which are really bugging me, like you wrote "agent" several times instead of "against", "wight" instead of "weight", "tails" instead of "tiles" etc. as well as some other mistakes (you wrote "I" instead of "him" once)
and it would be lovely if you could let someone help you out, it would make your story even more enjoyable (:
| Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 5
Please continue this story!
| DarkFrenz143 12/13/12 . chapter 2
HA! I'm the same as Kakashi when someONE force me to woke my brothers. Of course I be NICE *evil grin* to them. Just roll them them over until they fall from the bed. Ahhh what a great wake up call. Sometimes, I pile on the water over them. My mum never get angry when I do that. *peace
| Guest 9/18/12 . chapter 4
It's spelt BREAK! BREAK! not BRAKE, BREAK! you're spelling is horrible I can't even be bothered to try and read it anymore.
| Aiko Tachibana 8/25/12 . chapter 5
oh the uchiha brothers tsk tsk
| Catier 1/26/12 . chapter 5
I love your story, it's so funny. Can't wait for the next chapter
| Skittlesfuckinrule 11/25/11 . chapter 5
I LOVED THE STORY YOUR :)
| Kuro Mitsu 7/11/11 . chapter 5
Great chapter, I loved it. I like how Naruto just doesn't immediately fall for Sasuke and even refuses to go out with him; hehe, make Sasuke work to get Naruto back. A few grammar errors, but I see a vast improvement with your spelling as this is un-beta'ed. *And I've read dozens of fics on here with grammar and punctuation a thousand times worse with no one complaining about it, so don't worry about your few mistakes.* Glad you got back into writing, can't wait to read the next chapter! See ya!_
| Aishita Mitsuki 7/11/11 . chapter 5
Holy chizz! The bet between Sasuke and Itachi, does that mean there will be some ItaNaru? Coz if so, FUCK YEAH! :D
That is one of my OTPs :D
Anywaysss Sasuke is EVVIILLLL. Plotting againts cute lil Na-chan! Update soon! 8D
| BookHippie 7/10/11 . chapter 5
It's chill man - We all have our periods of blockage, and it's nothing to bust a gasket over! I'm glad Naruto decided to wait until he gets the respect he deserves! *nods* And oooh, Sasuke AND Itachi? This is getting fun - Update when you can, please!
| Kichou 7/9/11 . chapter 5
I wonder what Itachi will do to get Naruto before Sasuke? Nice chapter. Update soon please.
| NittyGritty 7/8/11 . chapter 5
You're story is interesting, but I have to admit you really need to check your spelling and grammar. That many mistakes takes me out of the story...
| Lingo10 7/8/11 . chapter 5
| ShivaTheDestroyer 7/8/11 . chapter 5
Iloved the story and it was funny made me lol. Can't wait till the next chapter! :D