Loved it, especialy how you worked to the end, no endless story about how they had to fight lucius and stuff, just skip it and put it in as a memory. On thing that i noticed was the way how relationships develloped really fast, that is something to keep in mind, cause with harry and draco it would be kinda plauseble with the dream things and sudden understanding, but the sirius taryn part could be read as a bit unnatural. Though since this is a verry ld story, and i'm interested how your writing develloped over the years, so off to the newer ones.

Machele

wonderful story. i do enjoy storied about Draco and Harry. though i am a bit dissappointed about the mirror one.

hey hey!! you made a little mistake on the end of the chapter. Ms. Argent takes Sirius' arm and calls him mr. BLACK. Might want to change that, or is it on purpose? I haven't read the next chapter so maybe it's a clue? Keep up the good work!

You made me cry. And that is a very good thing. I loved it. Great job.

That was just so much fun to read. Definitely wouldn't mind taking a peek at this 'verse again. Maybe some ficlet about this new generation of Marauders. Anyway lovely story! ~ZLB

Well this story is very interesting so far, and I love the interaction between Draco and Harry. But spotted a MAJOR typo in this chapter that really messed with my mojo.
It really shouldn't read : The company is appreciated Mr. Black.

Cheers!

I just couldn't help but getting a bit peeved at this sentence. "since your two houses consist of the smartest and easiest to teach..." I mean seriously if you're gonna write a FANfiction, the least you could do is get the facts right. Does the Ravenclaw house not exist in this story or have you totally disregarded the traits of each houses? Slytherin and Gryffindor certainly do not have the smartest students. Contrarily, i'd say that crabbe and Goyle could be said to be one of the dumbest students in their year.
I know it's only a minute inconsistancy with the books, but it's the little things that gets me sidetracked and put off by the story.

hello there...so i know this is a really old story and you've written it long ago...but i was wondering if there was any way i can read it without it being cut off...it's a really great story but it's cut off...and i can't continue -_- please please help ^-^

I really loved that story!

But here is a little piece of advice:

Have it read and edited atleast twice before you put it out to read. some of the words were double lettered where they weren't supposed to be and some had missing letters.


But over all it was fantastic!

i absolutely loved this story! im so glad you did some sort of an epilogue in the ending, i love those! r/r sum of my stories, if u want, savvy!

SlytherinBeauty

oh this is intense how will they cope pretendindg to be twins and when will they get back to hogwarts

wow this chapter is intense i am so loving this fic

aww poor draco imagine having to go through that i hope lupin knows what he is doing

u should have let them return as themselves!

that is so stupid harry has to save the world or ill be so mad
gr plz let him do it? email me about it