I think you need a beta for this story as there are a good few spelling errors and grammar errors. But the end of this chapter was sweet.

Enough with the snappy comments Draco

I cant wait to see their reactions when they both wake up together.

OH Draco you poor broken little love

Severus and Remus sitting in a tree

Interesting looks Draco, hehe, but it's only going to make it that much harder for you now

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- That's at the end of every chapter. Is the whole chapter getting posted? Might be worth it to double check.

Super süße Geschichte. Ich hätte mir vielleicht gewünscht, dass mehr von dem Endkampf gegen Lucius dabei wär, aber auch so wars sehr schön zu lesen.

Dankeschöne dafür

Ok! It makes sense now! Genius!

I would have waited till the end of the story to tell you how much I enjoyed it, but I noticed Ms... Um... A, something. Anyway, the lady whose name I just forgot called Mr. Brandon, Mr. Black. It was kind of distracting, but I love this story!

What? Ms Argent called Sirius Mr Black, she shouldn't know that name. Slip of her tongue or of your pen? I guess I'll just have to read on and see.

Loved it, especialy how you worked to the end, no endless story about how they had to fight lucius and stuff, just skip it and put it in as a memory. On thing that i noticed was the way how relationships develloped really fast, that is something to keep in mind, cause with harry and draco it would be kinda plauseble with the dream things and sudden understanding, but the sirius taryn part could be read as a bit unnatural. Though since this is a verry ld story, and i'm interested how your writing develloped over the years, so off to the newer ones.

Machele

wonderful story. i do enjoy storied about Draco and Harry. though i am a bit dissappointed about the mirror one.

hey hey! you made a little mistake on the end of the chapter. Ms. Argent takes Sirius' arm and calls him mr. BLACK. Might want to change that, or is it on purpose? I haven't read the next chapter so maybe it's a clue? Keep up the good work!

You made me cry. And that is a very good thing. I loved it. Great job.