So cute

So cute

so you did absolutly amazing! i really loved this story and how it ended was just perfect, i didn't find anything wrong with your grammar and spelling, nothing to keep the reader from reading it fluidly. you did very well!

Oh this is wonderful! Everyone is so in character and just the right mix of hurt to comfort. Lovely! Just what I needed to read!

Finally, a oneshot with ASTOUNDING buildup! Great job on this pairing!

What a fantastic story again! (Yep, I just started reading my way through all your amazing Sparrabeth fics; they are wonderful). I love how you describe the thoughts and feelings in here, and how Jack and Lizzie admit their feelings. Your writing style is so awesome, and somehow you always manage to be in character and show them so believable. Fantastic work, I really love this fic!

absolutely BEAUTIFULLY written :) one of the best sparrabeth fics on this site.

i absolutely adored it :D

LOOOVED IT!

I really liked this story. I think you did a great job with the characters, and I love the conversation at the end. "Oh" is a pretty good way to sum it up.

beautiful! I really like all of your stories (:

i love love love this :D

The Narrator actually really liked it! She only recently thought about Elizabeth and Jack being a 'thing' but you pulled it off quite splendidly! Believable and good writing style. Only one misspelling that she noticed... a 'sea' where it should have been 'see'.

Very well done!

One word... LOVE

Alright, but only because you asked nicely...

This is a gorgeous songfic, and one of the best Sparrabeths I've read in a long time. You accurately portrayed all of the characters here, and overall I just really loved it. Keep writing, Princess!

-VS

Oh, that was perfect! Everyone was perfectly characterised and it was really sweet ]