WOW! I Love this chapter and your story and the way you have written each person with a feeling of there true self it is a pleasure to read a story written by some one as talented as you are so thank you :)

Not a bad little story and I really like the funny bit's too !

So I give you: Five Silver Stars.

Hope to see more one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.

I loved this chapter a lot. I am curious to know what the song is and who it is by though.

I really tried to like this story but even I can't make myself suffer through this. It's commendable that you can write over a 100k of these stories but this isn't my cup of tea.

I would like to say i like the way you improved Harry's relationship with the Dursleys.

Love the story, but elaborating more and taking things slower would do wonders for it. And not that I mind the mary sue aspecct of the story, but by chapter 3 it is already getting outrageous. It doesn't really read as a story but more like someone just stating what is happening without creating any emotions or character depth. So far the relationship between harry and draco is at the point where marriage is already been thought about, but they've only shared one kiss and held hands. It is unrealistic and the relationship feels meaningless; they diidnt have any major events to overcome their past hate and bring them to the realization that they are in love.
And the dursleys are a mess. It feels as though you didn't even try with them. The relationship between someone who has abused and neglected a child and forced them to live in a cupboard for the majority of their life and the child doesn't not change after a few words. Doesn't happen, no way, no how. You would have been better off saying they got put under the imperio curse or something.

i was just reading the reviews others posted about the story and I am sad to say they had valid points in their reasons why they didn't like the and this is a big but, I am still enjoying the story. I unlike some really don't mind some Ooc characters especially harry draco couplings. It bugs me when i think about the durseleys and Ron and othere things but i keep from thinking about them by immerseing myself in the story and allowing my brain to make its own reasons up in the back of my mind as i am reading. You are doing a good job of keeping me entertained. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
Ishkabod

I'm sorry, but I don't really like this. At all. I couldn't even get through the first chapter. The dialogue sounds SOOOOOOOOOO fake. The Dursleys don't suddenly become human beings just because of some stupid letter Dumbledore sent them. And if by some miracle they did, Harry would still never confide in and talk to Aunt Petunia like he does in your story right away. And then there's the WAY Harry talks. It sounds so... Formal... And so NOT like him. I love Drarry, but I couldn't even get to the Drarry because I didn't like the first chapter... Sorry.

very nice story. I enjoy each and every part of it and the songs you have choosen. I personal brought some cds after reading the wonderful words of the songs from your chapters.

well I am going to go read the sequeal...

Wow! That was a great story! I was quite shocked by the changes in the Dursley family but it worked well in the plot. It's how they should've been from the first moment Harry came to them.

I am all for drarry, I love drarry, it's the only ship, whatever you want to call it that I'll read. But this, it's too, how can I put it without sounding offensive? Blah, that's how I see it. It's just too mainstream. Everyone is on Harry's side pretty much, Ron is actually getting along with Draco, which he never would. It's just too blah and cheesy. So, I can't read this.

You should have mentioned how out of character they would all be. I mean come on, the Dursley's liking Harry? Ron and Draco actually getting along and Ron calling Draco by his first name? It's not that realistic. How come everyone is so on board in this story. There should have been like one of them not agreeing with the whole Draco/Harry. That person should have been Ron.

would just like to say that in future stories dont say 'i liked that also' say either 'i liked that too' or 'i liked that aswell' (these are just examples)

whats the song

you are killing me almost literally I have a mini panic attack every time something happens omg I will be the frost person to die from not being able to read fast enough Aldo the first person to come back to life to finish a book