Most intriguing. I do hope this is not a one-shot, and that you do at any time continue this. Very well written.

Wow...! I just saw the movie the other day, and this was just PERFECT! You did an amazing job, despite this being so short. You decribed Lawrence better than I could, or even could have imagined ;]

You are a great writer, and don't stop. You're going to be just astounding not far away.

...This kinda makes me want to write a Wolfman fanfic... v In fact, I think I'm coming up with an idea right now...

Ovo

Oh, this is all there is? This is so beautifully written that I want more! You have serious talent, unlike some of the people flooding this website, and I would love to see more from you.

Amazing job!

Rich poetry weaves and creates a tapestry of beautiful art. Such a story deserves to be remembered for it's graceful, delicate dance of words and ink. Thank you for sharing this.

whoa, what an intriguing intro1 you got me hooked on, and it was perfectly written. Reading it made me sympathize much more with Lawrence, even though i had thought i did all of that while watching the movie.

Such depth and angst.

Beautifully written, you're a great writer, and i was sad to find not many reviewed this! grrrrr.

I like the beginning intro, please continue -

Wow...all I can say is...wow. This first chapter is beautifully written; incredible description. Bravo. You have officially caught my attention and I am willing to bet that this story will be awesome. Please update soon.

- Kim