 Immortalis Cruor Elf 7/3/10 . chapter 2UPDATE SOON! |
 akuma-river 5/20/10 . chapter 2Seems interesting.
I wonder how Ryoma will meet Fuji if he's still in the US? |
 Amy-sama90 5/20/10 . chapter 2hmmm interesting but I don't want ryoma to end up with fuji neither yukimura
-_-" those too are too feminine another manly cool guy would be great even if it's OC |
 Me 5/18/10 . chapter 2 Continue. You have only begun the story without delving into the plotline as of yet. I would like to see where this would go. |
 herbblood 5/18/10 . chapter 2This is interesting but just a hint of advice if you say there is gong to be implied underage sex, do that in the chapter it is in. |
 what the gaaah 5/17/10 . chapter 2Oh no, what's Ryoma gotten himself into now? Interesting story, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! |
 herbblood 5/12/10 . chapter 1this is rally good are you going to keep on working on it? |
 BadyGuz 4/6/10 . chapter 1Where Ryoga...?Great update. |
 afallenheart 4/6/10 . chapter 1Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE! |
 tati1 4/6/10 . chapter 1Excellent. What is his team's take on all this? Where was Ryoga? |
 soni-chan 4/6/10 . chapter 1This is a wonderful beginning to what seems to be an interesting story. You should continue it, for it feels incomplete as just a one-shot. |