I love this story. I'm also perversely happy that there aren't many like it on this site; I feel like a good portion of writers would have no idea what to do with an idea like this. But you played with it brilliantly. Perfectly satisfying in every way.

I don't have words for how much I love this story. You should write more extended fictions, you'd get billions of reviews. Oneshots are gorgeous but don't get you much attention. I want the world to know that is a literary genius!

very cute...lol

Haha, yes, his hat definitely has a personality. Also, the last line was très adorable.

And indeed, everything is okay when italicized.

HeadPhones.

Deliciously quirky it was! A delight to read.

Concidering Lewis Caroll himself made up an endless amount of words it's only fitting that a few more words (like magicking) be made up whilst concocting Alice fanfics.

b.t.w. magicking is a real word, google it... you'll see :)

Magic

vb -ics, -icking, -icked (tr)

1. to transform or produce by or as if by magic

2. (foll by away) to cause to disappear by or as if by magic

I love this idea, and you wrote it beautifully. That last sentence is by far my favorite. Great job! _