| Reviews for Mercy of a Monster |
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DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 32I think this was the only or the most positive chapter in this story! I liked it. Though, I miss the doom and gloom tbh and where's Chris?! O: Where is he? Have you forgotten about him? And whoo. I hope Jillian sorts her head out and Wesker stops violating her. The Monster. Please update soon. You've done a fantastical job if creating this. I'd love to see it finish. And the ending you wrote all those many moons ago. DCIPHOENIX |
DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 31Ffff... That was another phenomenal chapter. Oh, God, Jill! It is all an act right? The Stockholm Syndrome?! Luring him into a false sense of security and all. Oh and I loved this chapter and love where you're going with it. Also the description of Excella - "She was but a mouse standing idly, hypnotized, in front of a large snake who could strike at any moment." Utterly perfect. |
DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 30No. Jill... Oh my lord, what have you done, Jill?! No! A fantastic chapter. |
DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 29That was perfect... I... Once again there's no words to describe how this made me feel and the feelings between the lines. |
DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 22That was... *rocks in the corner.* not at all what I was expecting at all. But it was so damn good. Pun unintended. And still dark, angsty and helpless. Another breathtaking chapter. Poor Jill... But a part of her liked it. And he's not done with her. Oh lord, the poor woman. DCIPHOENIX |
DCIPHOENIX 5/31/13 . chapter 17Oh my... Wesker, you monster. That poor man. He tried to comfort Jill and it cost him his life. :( but did he do more to anger the Minster himself...? A great chapter. I loved it, oddly enough. So dark and grim. I love the whole thing so far. And smut to come?! Delightful. :) DCIPHOENIX |
DCIPHOENIX 5/30/13 . chapter 14Oh my gosh... I... Wow! |
DCIPHOENIX 5/30/13 . chapter 8Chrisssss! Oh, Chris... Anyways I loved that chapter. Insightful. :) DCIPHOENIX |
DCIPHOENIX 5/23/13 . chapter 1Oh my, Jill, Wesker, I... Its... I love it! :) I'm hooked! |
Lioness of The Steely Moon 5/19/13 . chapter 32Great chapter keep up the good work and update as soon as you can |
RedfieldvsBoulder 5/14/13 . chapter 1First off, it's nice to read a good fanfic that can keep me interested. I see alot of my own writing style in your work as far as attention to detail and in a grammatical sense. There are obviously errors, but they look more like typos to me. As far as the writer's block, I can relate to it. You can definitely tell where you have had it (I'm the same way. XD). But I have become immersed in this world you have created behind the scenes of RE5 and even though I'm not particularly fond of the smut myself, one must appeal to the masses and you have done so quite well. Keep up the good work! I would love to continue this soon! |
GhostGlowLight 5/5/13 . chapter 1omgg i love this story its amazing |
MaleficMistress 4/25/13 . chapter 32I can't tell you how excited I was to see that you updated this story! I was worried that you gave up on it but even though there were minor misspellings and the use of the same word back to back accidentally from the last chapter it was perfect. The story ending soon saddens me buuut it is still a fantastic read and I hope for more soon! |
Mary 4/19/13 . chapter 24 I know I probably should have commented 24 chapters ago, but I will now. The story is wonderful! The truth is, I have been so in love with the story, I keep forgetting to comment! good work. :) |
Ravenlaughter 4/19/13 . chapter 31Good to see you continued this story after all! Good job! I thought this story was dead for good, but I was wrong :) please update whenever you can! |