oh! cute! love P/O! poor Arthur!

Cute little ficcie marred by bad grammar... Ar...I find the part of Arthur watching Percy and Oliver a tad - creepy.

Cute. Some grammer mistakes but otherwise very good.

aawwww that was so sweet. I feel all warm inside now :)

haha. that's my percy! that's my dirty kinky percy. *ahem* anyways, great fic! i liked it!

Hey, great story. Please read and review my stories.

Nice! (Btw, if Arthur' looking to give away some of his puppies, direct him to me lol). I liked the bit where Arthur was spying on his son and Oliver...though I would have continued spying on them, not went outside *drools at the idea* but oh well, I guess Arthur isnt a slash oriented twisted pervert...

Cute story so far I like the characters you choose to focus on .I hope to see more chapters.