I liked it

i loved this story so much i started it like 2 hours ago and im alread done. Great job it was amazing!

Aaah... Finally finished the story. Storyline was set at a good pace and the plot is great for its simplicity. Thank you for sharing this. :)

Very Hot! Hmmm... They are falling in love. Me LIKE!

LOL Dumbledore's a pervert! He looked at Snape's erection! ROFL And McGonagall? I'd like to see the look on her face... .

you have mistaken diagon alley and hogsmeade and mixed them...i would get facts straight. and you could have rectified the lack of others being affected...

three chapters in and im considering stopping. its not a bad story but its really annoying to go from past tense to present tense. you need to go fix that

This is an amazing story :D

Can't stop laughing, too good chapter

I love this story too u have so many great email address is .Thank u I love Severus and Hermoine I always said they liked each nice to see another side of Severus.I loved the part when Ginny saw him in a towel that was loving I can imagine.I have a pic oh him in a slathering towel actually u are welcome to send me your email And I will send it to u
THANKS AGAIN

so far im in love with this story

I really enjoyed the story. My critique is that you brought some Diagon Alley stores to Hogsmede. Other than those, I was content with your imagination.

This goes on my favorites list!

awww :) very good!

I would really love to see more. If not for this story, then another Marriage Law fic. I normally don't like them, but this one was very good.