A very sad song and first part but I can't wait for more! Please, keep going!

Whoo-hoo! Ami managed to stop the war! _

BTW, serves Burns and the jerks right! XD

Can't wait to see what you do next. :)

Nice ending, Shelby.

I love it!

Nice job hon. You did well and I'm impressed. I look forward to more.

Nice, very good, slyptlak, on a story well done.

Aww, what a great ending for everyone, well except the bad guys. Great job!:)

aww how sweet _

Awesome job on this one

Awesome, I love it when Astrid punches Hiccup followed by kissing him.

Hurrah. They've won.
Ash and Hiccup were a good team.
Here are some good ideas:

(seeing Shelby guide along)
Astrid: She's odd.

(in a dungeon)
(Crabb sings a song, while Goyle plays a harmonica)
Burns: GR! SHUT UP!
Draco: GR! How humuliating. I'm locked up. And I can't use my magic because they locked my wand away.
Burns: I was so close! But I lost that chance. I don't care how, but I'll get my revenge on those savages and their friends... if it's the last thing I do.
(he throws weapons of your choice on pictures of the heroes)

hmm Not bad Shelby

Amazing! I know a suggestion for the ending where Ash and Ami kiss each other. The End.

ew, cutting off his tongue that is gross

Wow, Burns is finally done for good. Maybe Hiccup, Astrid and their dragons to join Ami and I bet Ash and Pikachu to the her home too. Great job and good luck!:)

Ha! Take that, Burns! XD

Onto the final chapter! Speaking of which, I do have ONE suggestion: that Danny ends up with Sam Manson. I mean, it's only fair. :)