|Reviews for Last Wish|
| browneyeddaisy 8/19/10 . chapter 12
| Longing to Write 8/19/10 . chapter 12
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story.
| Meyer-Madness 8/19/10 . chapter 3
I wonder if Edward was getting drunk because he thought Bella was getting back with Jacob. i also wonder what Angela thinks of Edward's closeness to bella. Does she suspect anything going between these two? Bella really seems to be in turmoil about her feelings but Edward is a sweetie and will not force her hand on the issue, she does need time. I cant wait to c what happens with Bella and Renee.
| Meyer-Madness 8/19/10 . chapter 2
That was heavy and the fact that Mike knew all along about Edward's love of Bella was really heart-wrenching. He basically gave the man his blessing to marry his wife while he himself is on his death bed. Idk many men who could do that or even begin to think like that. I was shocked by Bella's complete disgust for Jake for tryin to be a shoulder to lean on since they r friends. Edward does comfort her but I foresee her pushing him away for fear it would lessen her love of Mike or something. I feel like she is going to fight whatever connection they have as if it would weaken Mike's memory, maybe Im wrong and she will feel its ok since she has Mike's blessing. Great chapter!
| Meyer-Madness 8/19/10 . chapter 1
Whoa! I really thought Edward was the husband. They were so comfortable with each other and he seemed to know so much about her pregnancy (and apparently the last one). The dynamics are very interesting here, they spend a lot of time together and yet there seems to be a very platonic relationship that has never crossed any lines. The whole pg 4 convo seems to be the most taboo convo they have had. There are definitely some feelings and thoughts there but no one has dared voice them. I wonder what will trigger them to come forth. The whole ed husband thing with Jake was different and yet strangely Bella to maintain those friendships. Great chapter. I am intrigued.
| Chilly Howdy 8/19/10 . chapter 12
Thanks for finishing off the story :o) I loved the Epilogue :o) and the welcoming of Whit Anthony :o) very different name huh! Thanks once again for sharing this story :o) I loved reading it :o) Chilly x
| Fictor09 8/19/10 . chapter 12
The last sentence says it all!
| mommymac0508 8/19/10 . chapter 12
I loved it and I sad to see its over but I so look
Forward to more from you so hurry up and don't
Keep me waitting too long and thank you for
| Scarlett72 8/19/10 . chapter 12
As much as I hate saying good-bye to this story, and I really do, I think you wrapped beautifully. I don't feel wanting for anything at all. I loved every minute of this story. It was so well thought out and executed. I couldn't have asked for anything better. I am looking forward to the sexy three-shot. ;)
You say keep up with you on your blog. Does that mean that your future writings will only be published and no longer on ff? Either way I will there, just want to know.
Thank you so much for this story. It's been a grand time. See you. Lisa :)
| coryoplayer 8/19/10 . chapter 12
Short but absolutely great!
Looking forward to what ever comes our way in the future!
| Melolabel 8/19/10 . chapter 12
Sweet ending. Loved it!
| barbiedoll123 8/19/10 . chapter 12
aw the ending was so sweet
| vampluvr25 8/19/10 . chapter 12
I love that they came full circle. It started with a baby and ended with one too. I laughed at the Seattle Grace bit. I love Grey's Anatomy.
| cshorte 8/19/10 . chapter 12
| MissRe 8/16/10 . chapter 11
Jake is still an ass.. even if he does love her. LOL I'm glad that he was able to save her and hate that he misunderstood what Bella was rambling. I can't believe he proposed to her and I don't blame Bella for freaking out a bit. I'm glad that she found the strength to tell everyone the truth and I'm glad that they took it well. As for the epilogue... I just want to see them together and happy with their kids - whether it is just Mikey and Jessie or if they have a brood. Maybe 30 years in the future and Bella is getting an Oscar for adapting one of her books or writing a screen play. LOL I know you will find the perfect way to wrap it up... glad I finally caught up! Awesome journey.