Gah this is so good xD. I cant believe it only has 2 chapters and hasnt been updated. I hope you're going to continue this someday, because it's got A LOT of potential

LOLz xD i like the build up. I got one thing to say bout Sher. xD could be longer though. but great plot and im waiting... FOR THE NEXT CHAPY!

On a side note, Blank and I plan to write a fic in the ideal s4 world. U wanna help?