This was so well written great story!

So good so interesting so fresh a premise for the story. Couldn't you continue it or do a sequel?

I really hope you get back to this one as I am interested in seeing where it goes.

wow deep hope gibbs helps tim soon.

WOW!

This is very knowledgeable and eerie. I was mesmerized in this story and I loved the resolution of it. Thank you!

Thank you for daring to explore the darker side of emotion. Very few people dare to look at it. Keep up the good writing!

AAH! This is so good! I would love to read more... *hint hint* ) Keep up the good work!

really really like this story great job.

I really like how you handled this last chapter. A wonderful, though painful, story. *hugs* to Timmy.

Awesome new chapter, I love the way Gibbs went from livid to comforting. And I really like the twist with Tim staying with Gibbs. Thanks.

I too hope there is another story following what happens to Tim about the Cutting.

please tell me your going to start a new story with tim living with gibbs and how he helps tim get through all this.. i like this story so please keep writing...

awesome!

Aw! I loved the transition from furious!Gibbs to Papa!Gibbs. That was the perfect way for him to find out, and I'm glad that he realised there was something wrong before he saw the scars. I'm not sure that Tim is going to realise just how lucky he is for a while; having Gibbs as a babysitter probably isn't something one can appreciate while it's happening! Nicely done!

I love McGee. My heart goes out to him in your story. Glad he finally has Gibbs taking care of him! Very Good!