XD i love so much already! i have no dea where the radom corner came from though lol and i hope they make something like that happen in the manga, i 3 gopher

yay! happy ending! really good job on the story.

Nooo! A cliff hanger! Please write more soon. This is getting really good [:

Aw Gopher is too cute! Oh and the video you saw, i thought it was totally ironic since i looked up that song yesterday and saw that video yesterday too. Weird... Anyways, good story!

Haha! Eruka! Random explosions. Gopher groan. Overall, this chapter was pretty-scratch that was great and funny!

Aww Gopher is so cute [: Hopefully things will get better for him! Can't wait to read more!

*grabs dino kid by shoulders and starts shaking her* WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE AND MAKE GREATER CHAPTERS!

OMG! mys caracteres favorite! -

Chrona! Kid! (although I believe that it does not leave in fic) and Gopher! *O*

not yet and to read fic, but to read it, why I leave review before reading?

because... im stupid 8D

beforehand sorry 4 my english, is very very bad like my romantic life.. sorry for that too xD

Commendable effort cleaning up the stuttering. While it is still around (maybe inappropriately, since I thought Crona wasn't shy around Gopher anymore) it is much less excessive. Also, while it's nice that you've acknowledged me, it's probably better to PM people about constructive criticism.

Aw, too bad you couldn't keep up the genderless game longer,that's always fun, wasn't even necessary this chapter...

huh, again with the excessive stuttering... If I remember correctly, Chrona doesn't stutter around ragnarok. Though it was definitely appropriate when Chorna was talking to Soul.

Also, you may want to consider going over your chapters beyond spell-checking a little more before you post them, you've got a couple of mistakes here and there that exist as words, but don't exactly fit. Look for: precipitation and crude.

Otherwise, I can't wait to read more.

I bet he stopped calling Crona 'Crona-sama' Because he ran into Noah!

Thats my guess at least.

I for one like this story, its different from all the others. Gophers a weird guy though.

Nice story you have going here. But I feel that you're over-doing the stuttering considering how relaxed you've portrayed Chrona here. Also, I see that Chrona doesn't stutter around Gopher anymore.

If you're going to draw attention to Chrona's nervousness, I think it would be less annoying to try focusing more on body language, stuttering is ok, you're just over-doing it a little here.

This is an interesting idea keep it up

Great first chapter! I hope to see more! I wonder what Ragnarok will think of Gopher?