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Undead American
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
Great job with this!
Dur'id the Druid
2004-06-13 . chapter 1
Nice story! You really get into the mind of Faith. I notice you aren't writeing in the last year, but it's still a good story.
The Fink
2004-01-02 . chapter 1
That's a truly wonderful story. Very gripping and tense - and a great handle on Faith. Really enjoyed it. Thank you.
Brahmsian
2003-06-24 . chapter 1
This is a really good story, but I do have one small nitpick. At one point in it you say that "Faith had grown up in the area of Boston informally known as the Combat Zone". Since the Combat Zone was never a residential neighborhood, you should probably substitute something like "the toughest part of South Boston" for "Combat Zone" in that sentence.

I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
DSDragon
2003-06-08 . chapter 1
Wow... You really captured Faith in there. I once saw a news thing about maximum security prisons, and your descriptions seemed pretty accurate to what I saw on there too. I really like this fic.
Izhilzha
2002-08-24 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. I'm still catching up on watching Buffy (having not become a fan till recently), but you paint Faith so clearly, and her journey towards a new life, through redemption. It's beautiful, not just the story but the style. I'm off to read the sequel.
Sharon
2002-02-12 . chapter 1
I really liked Inside, the Buffy fic that you wrote. I'm already looking for more of your stories.
Seersha
2001-07-02 . chapter 1
Wow. That was great. I loved the letter Angel sent to her, I could imagine him writing her something along those lines exactly. Keep up the good work.
gf
2001-06-27 . chapter 1
Wow. I loved that. It's one of the best Faith-in-prison fics I've read. The dream sequences were the best part - they were so reminiscent of the ones on the show and gave me shivers :) Faith's character comes through very well throughout the fic.
cofax
2001-06-21 . chapter 1

That was excellent. Thanks for sharing it.
mia
2001-06-19 . chapter 1
great story. i think this is the first one i've read that was actually well written. all the sentences made sense and there werent any grammar mistakes that i noticed. (or remembered. something like that.) and sometimes characters (in fanfics) do things they wouldnt do in the show, but yours didnt do that. i liked it alot.
Willum
2001-06-15 . chapter 1
That was a very nice bit, covering what's happening with Faith since she turned herself in. It fit very well into the schemes of both series, and reflected on certain characters' reactons nicely. You do have a talent with telling good stories with all these characters.
HonorH
2001-06-10 . chapter 1
Gyrus, this is an incredible piece of work (told you I'd get around to reading it sooner or later). Faith comes alive in this. Every emotion is authentic, every memory, every word she says. I love your dream sequences, too--very reminiscent of the show. The story is painful, yes, but also uplifting. Great job!
Shandethe Sanders
2001-05-14 . chapter 1
Wow! This was really, really good! I love Faith, and it's great to finally read a good fic about her. Please write more.
Catherine
2001-05-14 . chapter 1
Please Continue!
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