Aw, that was so cute! By the way, why is it a humour fic? It should really be an angst fic, it was quite sad.

"Her skin was the loveliest shade of gray I had ever seen..."

This is great. Sparky in love! Even I wouldn't have thought of that.

Nice, but how is that "humor"? It's sad! I mean sure, it's Rygel, but...slugs have feelings too. Sniff...poor Spanky. Someone give him a hug.