|Reviews for Sepulchre|
| sam04 4/9/13 . chapter 1
maker's breath that was one of the most beautiful things i've ever read... i've cried through the whole thing and i can't even stop now... i adore your alistair/female aeducan storys so much i wish you would write a lot more just for me :D
| shadoedseptmbr 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Okay, god. I'm just gonna curl up here in the corner and weep for a while. Cover me with a blanket if I get to be distracting. So good. And the poem is perfect.
| Caedus14 7/3/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagining of Aeducan-Allistar romance. Bloody brilliant.
| Dr34ming 1/8/12 . chapter 1
Very Potent. I loved the use of the stanzas to break up the story and time. The poem fitted beautifully.
| NuitNuit 2/25/11 . chapter 1
So beautifully written and just heartbreaking. Wonderful work.
| Crazy4DA 9/10/10 . chapter 1
Very emotional, pulls on the heart strings more than a little. Amazing imagery with the combined use of the poem and the story. A very nice read. :)
| spike tashy 8/23/10 . chapter 1
very well done.
you made me tear up.
| Vema 8/14/10 . chapter 1
This was AMAZING. I absolutely adore it. I was literally weeping towards the end. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
| Abydos Jackson 6/18/10 . chapter 1
Finally found time to take a peak and I'm so glad I did. This is my kind of fan fiction! Really emotive and beautiful.
| Fluidfyre 6/5/10 . chapter 1
What a lovely piece - the poem suits SO well. It and your writing match hand in hand in the beauty of their love and the weighted heart that follows.
| imgomen 4/28/10 . chapter 1
A very big change from the Alistair we know and love from the games, hey? Lovely, bittersweet short story. That last bit could've used a bit more emotional 'oomph', if you ask me, but I certainly enjoyed reading it.
And don't worry about the formatting. It's fine.
| FyreBrande 4/23/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I loved it! So sad, and very in character of an ending for Alistair.
| serenbach 4/23/10 . chapter 1
I have no idea how I missed this- my apologies. It's so beautiful. That poem fits in perfectly and you used the images in it so vividly. It's so sad how he's lived his whole life without her yey still loves her so much (this is the ending of my Aeducan). I like that Alistair misses the whole group, as well as her and the ending paragraph gripped me so powerfully. Great job! :)
| LittlePinkTerror 4/22/10 . chapter 1
I have a special place in my heart for Fereldan's goofiest King; it saddens me to think that this is probably such an accurate view of how things might turn out.
He must grow, age, and return to Ozrammar someday-I imagine that this is how it would be.
So very sad and so very touching! It did choke me up and I enjoyed it much, thank you!
| Zute 4/21/10 . chapter 1
*sniff* I always loved that poem. Nicely written!