OMG I ALMOST CHOKED LAUGHING

Brilliant story! What's the food fight story called?

:D

Remember what I said about the characters informing the prose? I think you nailed it on this one (no pun intended). All the characters are remarkably well rendered, especially Leonard's phone conversation with Sheldon.

And of course the smut is very hot. Well done.

I really don't like how much Penny gets to tease compared to Leonard. And to be honest, you kinda lost be attention-wise when they began actual penetration. Also, them getting out of the elevator was pretty weird - since I didn't immediately understand that they weren't 100% enough level with the ground to just walk out lopsided.

However, I did enjoy Leonard's little thoughts during foreplay - his logic and all - as well as Sheldon's when they're are getting out of the elevator. The actual smut was pretty damn good as well 3 Good job - I found it quite enjoyable (:

What did Sheldon mean by that in the end? Yes? or no?

PERFECT voices for the characters. Great story.

Great story... I love how you kept it concise but it hit all the right notes... it had a great blend of playfulness, humour and well... smut (but tasteful smut! Which is rarer than I'd like it to be). The Sheldon quote at the end had me rolling. Keep writing please, I love your work!

I see you haven't published anything in a while and that makes me very sad. I do enjoy your fics. Is it okay if I request more Leonard/Penny smut? :D Because your very good at it and there isn't enough out there. So yeah, of course you don't have to, but it'd be nice! :) Great story.

Great story!

That was very funny :) loved it !

That was great! totally felt like i was reading an episode. Keep it up, and don't be afraid to write more smut ;D

absaloutly hilarious

This was hysterical!

Love this scenario and if they ever fix the elevator this is exactly how I want them to break it again

HOT! Loved it. :)