Cool! I hope you continue with this story.

vary good so far. but you left one loose end. there were three digieggs used yet two people were made. I keep thinking that it wold have been ryo that came out. remember his digimon is base perfect and can acheive stage 9 ultiamiat.(zeed=millioniumon)

Very cool how you brought the first confortation with Kain into this story, along with the asorbition of the Soul Reaver(the Egg of Miracles). I hope to god that when this is over, you end it so you can do one for Soul Reaver II, though it would leave one problem, who to play the part of Janos Audren?

First off, sorry that I haven't review in for awhile. This story is becoming more interesting by each chapter. I can't only wait and see what develops in the next chapter. Hope that you have it on ff.net soon.

This is good. A little gorey, but oh well. You know, it would really suck if Izzy had figured out a way to get Tentomon up to Herculeskabuterimon. He is Izzy after all, and if anyone could figure out how to do it again then it would be him.

Excellent work, so far! Good luck to you.

Rating: 8.9/10!

Rating: 8.7/10!

Quite good. It may look much more clearer if you use a new line for every character who speaks.

RAting: 8.4/10!!!

This was a really good chapter. I already see the different roles each character play, like Dracomon is the Elder God/Mortannus, Tai is Kain, Davis is Raziel, and TK and Kari are somewhat along the lines of Ariel. If this keeps up, will we see someone like Izzy become the Time Streamer Mobius and Myotismon as someone similar to Vorador or Janos Audron? Also, since we are rather close to the Cididel, will Tai we weilding the Soul Reaver?

Great story. This is a real good original story. I like how you have Davis, Ken, Kari and TK going against the former DigiDestined that they considered to be their friends. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter which I hope will be out in the near future.

Given how this is similar to LOK: Blood Omen, will Ken and Davis be vampires? I hope so, since it would be interesting to see how that would play out, even though it would rase the question of who would be Kain and who would be Raziel? And more importantly, will we see the Hylden make a play for power? (for info on the Hylden, play Soul Reaver 2 and Blood Omen 2)
*cues Mobius voice over*

Jay Man...Redemeer and Destroyer, Pawn and Messsiah. Welcome, time spun soul. Welcome to your destiny.

Yikes...I like it. I don't mind the small grammar errors, this stuff is great! Please e-mail me when the next piece of writing is out!