Hey I love this story. I wrote one too and I would like to tell you that I used your almost cracking my skull line sort of. Sorry I think I did it unconsciously but I noticed so I wanted to tell you. I don't want to seem umm wel fake. Anyway I love your story very much as I said in the beginning and I read some other stories from you as well and I liked them too but this is perhaps my favorit :D

*turned into melted puddle of herself* moe

so many cute scenes... I feel like reading it over and over again

I agree Ainosuke, he's the best when he smiles (and smirks, and snickers and all...XD)! aw, I feel so mellow

The scenes between Hitomi and Yume are a total win! For a long time I wanted to see some interaction and this feels so right I love how she tried to drag him to her room XDD I love how Yume smoothly ditched her efforts XD I love how Ainosuke teased his brother about that I feel so happy all of a sudden :3

and the last sentences are really nice, feels like a good ending note

*goes back to her melting XDD*

nice ending!

Aw. 3 Cute ending I'm so glad they are both happy

oh my gosh, this so heart-warming!

good job(_)! hope you'll write again for another(_)

GOSH! THIS WAS AMAZING! LOVED IT!

THANKS SO SO SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!

*died* Yumehito, you're the best... is he a walking miracle or something...? *in awe*

Yume sure makes a slightly evil cop with all those snickers xD

I smell too much coincidences in the air...XD oh, scary cliffhanger I can't help wanting the next chapter, but the thought that it will be the last one... is so sad ;_;

this is awesome!

How uncool...its amazing how well you've managed to capture the character of Yumehito...

this is exciting!

it feels really like the drama O.o

oh, Ainosuke is coming to rescue his brother! Such a perfect plot :D but yeah, Yume became uncool...XD nice thing to see him all well and uncool from time to time, really XD

I was thinking for some time already about this buta tori gang... and now you mention them... XD makes my detective senses working XDD

but Hitomi and her switching to call Yume by his name was the best :DD that's so much like her XD

Kato-san is like an island of calmness in this part. Sasuga Kato-san, it must be the work experience XDD you're really good in writing suspense

nice to see Ainosuke back to his activity XDD

I really love the conversation between Kato and Yume XD! especially the part when Yume explained Ainosuke's reaction related to the kidnappers. And I adore Kato-san for going with Yume's flow too I guess I really like the talking parts XD

i love the way their both trying so hard to return to the old days...

I just need to comment, I adore this chapter XD their roles seem to change

And Yume did almost the exact thing that Ainosuke did somewhere in the beginning of the special! XD I enjoyed this little scene a lot XD

oh and Ainosuke peeking into computer, I knew he wouldn't let me down! XDD

by the way, Yume keep on sleeping around a lot, that's somehow very cute...XD

too bad, I don't know this cartoon XD

this is so intense...such raw emotions!

You are a genius!