Very romantic and sad, layering the narrative line of their story with his memories of his wife's eyes in various contexts. This works really well. Very strong emotion. Thanks for writing it.

Very evocative of Tinga. (Read your daughter's review - how sweet.)

Oooh! I like this. May I ask what your daughter said?

Hey hey hey!

The poem is really good...if I were you I wouldnt let go of that muse!

This is your best one yet. The 'eyes' theme is so appropriate as Charlie describes both Tinga and himself. Very touching.

that is great. you are a great poet mum. keep writing.

Wow, that was... awsome. _