The story itself is interesting, but the rampant grammatical and spelling mistakes make me want to rip out my hair. Try to edit your work more carefully.

Just re-watched Labyrinth and couldn't resist.

You evil, evil person.

I can't believe that I'm just now finding this! You wrote a wonderful Labyrinth fic, I really hope you do some more! Just lovely. :)

a unique labyrinth story, exciting and well written.

warning: watch malapropisms, spell check doesn't catch them... i can beta if you want; ginduf gmail . com

thank you,

ginny

OMG,you're good,really good!This is brilliant,write more bout JS! :D

y'know, there's a reason I never enlisted. So I don't have to do drills, especially since I'm done with the whole school thing.

I'll forgive you just this once.

Good story. Thanks for writing it.

Though, it probably is shocking you that a review comes out of nowhere, so long after your last update, hey?

As I said, good story. Danke.

Aw. What a sweet ending. In the earlier chapters you have many spelling errors, but it was a great story to read.

Fan Fiction is FINALLY working to a certain extent and I am able to review. First, let me say thank you so much for sending me the last chapter when I couldn't get into it. It made me happier than you could know, especially after a depressing day of no updates from anyone on my favorites list. Rob gave me your story to read and I enjoyed it very much. I had to laugh when you had Sarah go get hot cocoa for comfort. Rob does that all the time while we are talking :) I think she is addicted to the stuff. Anyway, about your story... it was very lovely to read, and a nice break from my homework. And the creativity! All those addtional historical events and people you had to add was quite impressive. I would never even attempt to do what you did, but you pulled it off so nicely. And it's a comfort to know that Sarah is immortal. Your ending was very much appreciated, how you informed your poor readers about all that had happened and the blossoming romances between the "next" generation of rulers. *sigh* Your story fulfilled my fluff factor need for the day. Thanks.

Lovely. Is that the end?

I just have to say that your story is very intriguing and exciting as well. I just hope that you'll continue to write this kind of story some more.

That was an absolutely wonderful story, you had me captivated from the very beginning all the way to then end. Congratulations!

A fitting end to a wonderful story. You are an awesome author and I hope to god that you have realized it by now. i hope you keep writing because your talent is obviosly awesome.

***** five star rating. (five being best) _

If I were you I'd be damn proud of this story. It's amazing.

oh my god! This was amazing! Can I say that again! THIS WAS AMAZING!

Now you've done it. You had to put a teaser in the epilogue. So, are you going to write a story about Jaren and Juliette? Hmm? I hope so!

I really do hope that you are going to write a sequel. You better! I want to hear all about the next generation! *grins* Loved the story.