I love this piece. So sweet.

This was so so so SO beautiful. You've written it gorgeously, and you captured their characters and emotions so flawlessly and realistically. I loved the imagery in this, very simple but stunning.

The last line was poignant and sweet. Amazing work.

Yes, certainly! Not sure what direction you are planning to take it, since chapter 1 read almost like a prologue - but I would read future chapters if you write them.

Hell ye you should! Thanks for the talentedly written story hope you update soon.

i love it! pls continue it!

I know I'm also the one that replied right away for the RoyxRiza story, but like I said, I like your writing a lot. Winry and Ed are so cute and this story is pretty believable :D

This is a brilliant story that is writing so well. I think you captured the personalties of the characters well (which I don't find with many writers lately) but I'm not sure you should continue this story. I don't feel like it really needs more but really you should write whatever comes to mind.

oooh! this is really good! poor Ed! :( if you want to continue, go for it! :D

This story is great! I think you should continue! :D

I think that, as long as you go into no further detail, K is fine. I would love to see this continued!

This is good, but i think its more rated t, but its just me.

Yes. I seriously love all you fanfictions.

aw, that was so fluffy. In a good way :D

Very sweet and wonderfully written.

Great story :)

Really a sweet piece. I particularly like the ending, with Ed staring out the hill where his house used to be.