Love it! So different from many of the other stories. I hope you update soon.

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this is greate

please update

LOVE the concept! Angelus is Buffy's master,hmm? Althought I did expect more of an interaction between Buffy and Angelus, it was a good start and it had me hungry for more!

Cordy the B!tch got raped! Hahah...I know, I'm being meana nd immature but I just rewatched some episodes from Angel season 4, so I'm sure I could be forgiven just this once.

So, how is Angelus going to train Buffy? Will he change his mind about her? Well? Please UPDATE! I NEED to know!

Roxy

Really hoping that you will update soon.

Cute, but if I'm not mistaken this seems to an exact copy of Tngo's fic and since I know her personally. I know she hasn't given anyone permission to use her story or the premise of it.

I'm really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work!

P.S.-are you going to update artful vengence? I love that story! Please let your readers know. Thank you.

wow

I just discovered your story and absolutely love it! It's so refreshing and really dark and serious for a change. Keep it up!

This was a superb chapter. You write beautifully, really. I know I've said so before but your just know how to describe each scene to a T. Nest/Cordelia being one that actually made me shiver. I had to read it slowly, painstakingly so because I actually pitied her but you still made it seem for all intensive purposes like a good scene. I actually didn't mind it at all. Nest is a slippery bugger aint he? It's a wonder Angelus an himself never get on.

Spike/Willow make me giggle. Only red would get some head patting. I'm sure he could work that swift fear that seems to over whelm her with just a look to his pleasure. I'm bias, I don't care how small a part Drusilla played, I'm just giddy I got to read some more of her! Poor Oz...I can only imagine the tea parties his going to be forced to have... lol...

Xander... *scoff* Yay, he got the abusing like woman and clothing duty. Nifty!

Buffy is to sweet wanting to explore the dust and Angelus well remained his seemingly sexy himself. I liked that you went so far as to actual have him pick up a book! That's a trait most people lack in their stories when it comes to bedroom activities just to continue showing his insanely sexual a creature he is. NOT that he isn't walking sex but you get my drift, your giving him layers and Buffy too. I like that she isn't all out kick ass - not yet at least... hah hah..

Can't wait for your next chapter! *excited*

The beginning was very depressing, but I loved the end. I can only wait to see how Buffy and Angelus' relationship progresses.

-Kate

great chapter.

love the darla/xander scene.

is there going to be some mention of buffy somehow being recarnated from the past slayer. I noticed that the master noticed she looked familar.

great work

Awesome Chapter,

It was so vivid and well structured; you’ve done an amazing job writing this chapter and I just couldn’t get enough of it, well except for the rape scene. (I forgot to read the warning, which is kind of funny since I was one of the people who said that you should just put a warning up.)

I loved everything about this chapter and it had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. The Darla/Xander scene was kind of funny and Darla acted exactly as I thought she would, I kinda feel for Xander. Dru in all her insanity also made me laugh; Oz is definitely in for one bizarre and bumpy ride.

I felt sorry for Willow, she is just too innocent and sweet to be subjected to a monster like Spike and Spike is his usual sick/twisted self which is good to see.

I feel really bad for Cordy, I mean I don’t like her that much and she gets on my nerves every now and again but no one deserves to have something like that happen to them.

The Angelus/Buffy scene was interesting and I loved the part where Angelus in all his rage killed the minion. Buffy’s reaction to Angelus before she realized that he was a Master Vampire was also pretty awesome. You’ve definitely done an amazing job writing the personalities of all the characters, but of course my favorite is Angelus. (Just can’t get enough of that crazy vamp).

I’m really enjoying this fic so far, it just keeps getting better and better as you go along and I can’t wait to see what happens next with Buffy and Angelus.

Please Update Soon.

That was cool and I loved the different cast but thankfully the main two story so who was the girl at the end

Maria

Really like the story. Very Interesting.