I loved your story. Very well written, short and too the point and at the same time very emotional. I loved it so keep writing!

Chow!

LG

Interesting.

Hey! I hope you didn't forget about this little story! Don't abandon it! It has a lot of potential! I love the refreshing attitude of "'Last Knight' was a dream". How many fans of FK only wish it were true! As for writing a story, it's so hard to bounce off the 'Last Knight' ending in a new and different way. I feel your story needs a little polishing, it reads roughly. Sort of like a set of stairs being laid, this is just the base and first few steps. The varnish & polish will come later. And a Grand Staircase will emerge! If you want to discuss it, send me an email at !

Thanks for the story, and for bringing back Urs. She's one of my favorite characters on FK.

i like it it new good work ;-)

I liked it. I always hated how the series ended with Nik killing Nat & then having LaCroix kill him. Thanks for sharing.