|Reviews for The Other Side of the Lense|
| ClockworkScales 4/30/13 . chapter 1
I didn't get the "Keith loved sarcasm" comment and how it's related to the last sentence... Other than that, not a bad story. This is like the only Keith-centric story I could find on , but after I had written my own! I'd appreciate it if you took a look at it, it's not very long.
The only thing I found a little odd is how the story stops just as he's about to see his girlfriend. Considering the big paragraph about her, you'd think it might go for longer and actually include her in the story. But that's just me.
Anyway... I liked the smoking scene. :)
| Omen freak 5/16/10 . chapter 1
its really good, keep it up :)