lol I love this. That was a wonderful bit from an outsider's perspective that really gave a vivid quality to this that I appreciated. Thank you for sharing this.

'And I still wasn't exactly sure /what/ had just happened.'

Awesome, sheer awesome. Haha, that was great! That last line especially got me. Because those guys just do that to you. This one's going on my favorites list for sure! :)

LOL!

That's all I have to say :D

Just another case, eh? You did a great job portraying the relationships between the five both accurately and humorously. Loved the story!

Wow. Too cool. You'd never think they'd actually work together, and then are shown that they do, and quite well. Great story.

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD BRAVO! THE MOST BEAUTIFULLY HUMOURSLY WRITTEN SHORT STORY I HAVE EVER READ! lol I positively LOVED it! . DDDD lol I just...well I don't think I can say much more than that to get my point across ' BUT WOW! DD

What a great idea. This one really cheered me up. They could take on anything!

*GLEE* You have managed to sumerise the relationship of these five men in a rather short piece of writing and you did it perfectly! Fantastic!

yes! you got the 'puzzled air of an outsider' down perfectly!

and i love that hopkins is all 'what did you call me? srsly?'

thanks for the [loud and embarrassing] laugh!

OH THEY ARE JUST SO DAMN AWESOME! :D

"And Holmes had pulled his pipe out and was looking bored again."

I laughed so hard at that!

MORE PLEASE! I love a fresh point of view!

LOL Liked the humor, I did. Awesome one-shot! More, please?

Ha! Loved the last line. This was such a lovely little thing. I LOVE how you have Holmes behave around the inspectors. Just golden.

And I'll bet he still won't ever know what's going to happen. What a treat!

I dont think anyone would be able to understand exactly what had happened when that group gets together unless Holmes explained it later. Lol

Excellent work!