Beautiful! It really got a main point of the book!(:

I don't like reading poems but I'm glad that I took the chance and read this. It's amazing!

Awwwwww! It was amazing. They are both really sad but it then picks up at the end. I almost wanted to cry. Those were very good!

I'm almost vrying, this was so sweet, great job! :)

very sweet :)

This poem relates a lot to Lce but its a great poem. Plus Daniel though in the book doesnt want Luce to rememberor else she starts all over. Other than that another great job :)

From your ghosty reader,

the ghosty writer

I really, really enjoyed that poem. It describes Luce's personality and follows the book's own "essence. :) good job I have no other comment.

From the ghosty reader,

the ghosty writer

omg!that was so good

Terri x

Really good, I just read fallen in last month! Loved it!

that was the sweetest most disgusting thing I ever read!

hell that made me want to sing myself to death thought my voice is not sweet... and there is the lie! its was nice and so i say welldone

you will become somhing yet unless... nevermind but you got it right those words speak it all even with so few of them

That was beautiful!

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awww, it is soo cute, and true in the story, though i haven't finished

I like! Which is a surprise becuase I don't usually like poems. Though your poem IS the first poem I've read on FanFiction.

That was wonderful. It really captured the whole story. Great job!

oh my gosh. it was incredible! great rhythem! i can really feel the passion that mustve seeped out as you wrote this! oh, wow! amazing! it was so...incredible! great job! wish i wrote it! lol!