HOT! I think Watson should be late more often!

:D

OK O.O in desperate need of a cold shower NOW! I'll have to try and make it there on my wobbly knees...

A great first go, as you know, of course! I will get around to posting mine eventually, not sure when though ;P

Seawanderer xox

Great piece. As for "improvement", I woul maybe suggest more Watson POV at the beginning. It feels kinda like I started reading in the middle of a sentence, it goes so fast. I know you're looking for fast, but...

Also, I' break up the "p0rn" paragraph, give it more time and build-up. I mean, go for it! :D

Absolutely *not* rubbish. In fact, beautifully and tastefully done, although I do hope that there will be a future endeavor where Watson returns the favor in an indentical fashion to Holmes' effort. ;-) I loved it, and again, I greedily ask you that if your muse inspires you, that you won't hestitate to share more of your lovely writing with us. There needs to be more Holmes/Watson in the world, and you are admirably able to provide it from what I've read. Thank you!

Adorable and very well written, especially if it was your first time writing something like this. I've read much much worse :)

I can't believe that that was your first time writing this sort of story. It was very well written. It wasn't overly graphic and it wasn't horribly cliched. And it was both hot and comforting. It wasn't just random sex, it meant something. Very good.

This was no worse than other stuff i've read. ;)

Very hot, and incredibly good considering that this is the first time you've attempted something like this.

I thought it was really lovely, and quite good for your first time. Good on you for pushing your boundaries. I think it's something everyone should do (myself included, haha) ;)