! dat was soo cool! espicially the e-mail parts of it!

henred5

O! i love CTR..i still have it too! so glad u used it in ya story..as a little relife typa thing! lol :D

wicked chapter...but a little tearful!

nice dreams like! lol

wicked chapter...maybe cud have been a bit longer..but nevermind!

lol! OH NO! wots da mum about to say...wot a cliffhanger!

great wrtitin..keep it up!

henred5

lol!the fightin description was bravo and bril! well done..seriously wicked!

henred5

cool chapter! seriosuly wicked..how Xiao beat Jin on Gran Trismore! !:D (sos bout da spellin!)

henred5

lol..dis oughtta be gud! i seriously feel sorry for Xiao here!

GR8 STRY LOVED IT SO MUCH YES SEQUEL HAPPY ENDING PLEASE ..

Wow, this was really good, I love it! And the conversations between you, Jin and Ling at the start and at the end of each chapter is really funny! I hope you'll make many sequels to this story, coz I really loved this and you're an amazing writer! So keep it up and have fun, that's all that matters!

I really like the story. I have to say...I do have a tekken obsession. I rented Tekken 5 from blockbuster the other day and I play it...a lot. Today, i got up showered and it was tekken all day. That is until my mother forced me to get off and thats when i came on the computer and decided to look up all kinds of tekken crap. I found your little story thing some how...it apealed to me because it was about ling xiaoyu and jin kazama. My Absolute FAV tekken characters. Oh they make the cutest couple though i am some what jealous of xiaoyu...because i am in love with jin :3 He is so damn finE! oh my what has become of me...im in love with a video game character...well thats me for ya...i was never the normal one...So yea i REALLY liked your story and i am really looking foward to reading the sequal, i like reading, only stories i like though...like the one you wrote . well yea i must get to bed now...i have to get some rest to play tekken 5 tomorow...lol ok you could e-mail me if you want to... ok well Gokigenyo :3

sAraH the pixie

HEY UR STORY IS GOOD BUT CONTINUE IT DONT MAKE IT A SAD ENDING MAKE A HAPPY ENDING... NEXT CHAP FAST.

hey ur story was good...write more dont stop it here!

Great story!

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! It's so good!

Ellese-chan

Wow! It's done. I'll look forward to your sequel... i know its out now. Keep on writting Xiaoyin (i dont know if i spelled it right) fics. Please make the sequel have a happy ending... so far most of the Ling-Jin fics i've read, end by Jin going away and blah...blah...blah. But thats the story. This is a very good fic!