holy crap he got it right! O.O wait she killed Bambi!

I love this story. Jake is so sweet and innocent and trying so hard and "all he feels anymore is want". Quil and Embry in the background of his mind are perfect as we imagine his friends to be. The big sisters are so mature and so ready to look down on little dorky brother. And Bella at the beginning is just as we first met her, miserable and unable to help herself. But by the end of your story she is reaching out to Jake and "good things are happening". I love it, thank you.

I've read this oneshot at least six times and I still absolutely love it. You've just completely and perfectly captured the characters and the situation.

Your characterization leaves nothing to be desired.

those inner voices really cracked me up! fine job you did there.

Have I told you I love this one? Don't know if I have, but if I haven't, it's about time. I just reread it, and yep. Love it :)

(her running theory, she said, was that he had a TARDIS stomach - and then she'd lectured him for not knowing his British TV)

This made me laugh right from the start and I kept laughing through the whole fic. Jacob's internal musings were hilarious.

You really are a great writer, you can catch the essence of a character so well! it's so hard to find stories that have build up, it usually "I love you (insert character name)".

I love your writing style.

wow. that was really sweeeeeeet!

Hahaha, I loved it.

That was soo cute! I loved it! I like your Jacob soo much more than Stephanie Meyers...

love this. love how you seem to be jacob black's brain twin :)

OMG! I absolutely loved it!... except for the f-bomb. I hate that word, it gets so boring after a while. But gosh, this was a wonderful excerpt in the life of Jake and Bells.

Can I just say I love your one shots & drabbles? 'Cause I do, I really do!

Big smiles here! Loved that!