pleez continue!

Great story very well done. Please write more.

What? Halo? What's she doing there? And no offense to Gohan, but I thought he died. Or is that MIRAI Halo's time? I'm very confused, so please update soon so that I won't be. Great story!

Damn you. Write more. Now. too see my feelings on the way you write, read the review i just left on moonlight melody.

grrrr.

lol...love it! kewlios! if u make another chappy, can u e-mail me n tell me? thx!love it!bye byes!

M.O.R.E. Quickly please... I love it.

This reminds me a lot of the Trunks Special. I bet is was based on that, ne? But it's going to be about Halo. Good so far. Keep it up. It will be interesting to see where this goes.

Hmmmmmmmmmm, not bad, not bad at all! I personally like your Moonlight Melody better (grrrrrrr) But this is actually pretty good. yep, un hun.

(rereads it)

Come to think of it, this is EXCELLENT! Right more or i will (ahem) do something aweful to you...

Yay! I'm first to review! _ Dokies, I really like this, Halo. Please do more, like ASAP.

P.S.- !