 miss.no.limits111 8/31/10 . chapter 1great writing, poor Sirius! |
 Pleck 8/20/10 . chapter 1:( |
 chocolate fish 8/20/10 . chapter 1Awh! That's horrible! Poor Sirius! Stupid death nibblers. |
 stormystars 8/14/10 . chapter 1 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! thats so sweet! I hate the fact that Marlene and Sirius has to die. I think they would have been cute together. |
 Inkfire 7/11/10 . chapter 1This was so well done... |
 Tyche Nemesis 5/7/10 . chapter 1the end is so so sad! i was reading the third paragraph and i was like 'oh they're going to get together...sweet, but not really that good' but then when i read the last line i remembered she died...so good, but it makes me sad :(. |
 if the stars were mine 4/28/10 . chapter 1Interesting...
I really liked it :) |
 Vera Rozalsky 4/15/10 . chapter 1A wonderful little vignette of life and love in wartime. Seize the day,... which Sirius doesn't. I love how you contrast his previous recklessness (which is canon) with his sudden, transfixed hesitation. Really wonderful. |
 RavenEcho 4/14/10 . chapter 1Sad but I loved it. |