 Average Everyday Sane Psycho 8/20/10 . chapter 1this is great so far... hope to see it be continued though it does work well as a one shot too |
 EverlastingMuse 8/16/10 . chapter 1good! |
 JainaZekk621 6/12/10 . chapter 1This is really great! D |
 maggie-mae-pie 4/28/10 . chapter 1I totally love this! Hope there will be more chapters in the future!(: |
 x-cristiee-x 4/19/10 . chapter 1 this is a really cute story!
i lovee the title :) |
 Keyboard Samurai 4/16/10 . chapter 1I like the whole foreshadowing about the Changs. |
 xnerdark 4/14/10 . chapter 1I'm a bit confused. I thought it was weird that her dad loaded his guitar in the car. Then she tells him they're taking the car. Then her dad asks if Artie has been over yet, but if he helped Artie with the guitar...
Cute hand holding and matching. |
 Berytni 4/14/10 . chapter 1How...adorable! :Teehee:
I just finished writing something kinda sad, so I needed a story like this. |
 Char-chan 4/14/10 . chapter 1aw so cute - can never resist Tartie fluff! hehe |
 Artemis Rayne 4/13/10 . chapter 1Yay you're writing it! Oh my gosh this is so fantastic. And for my own selfish pleasure, I am ecstatic that it's grown into a three shot. That means more writing from you :) And you've set it up to be a really interesting story from what you've got now, so I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next.
And matching his tie to her dress? Awh! Can he be any more adorable? (I don't think so, but then you always surprise me with something even cuter and I wind up eating my words.)
-ArtieR |
 Hecate's Rath 4/13/10 . chapter 1Lovely, bb. I love it. It's light and happy and perfect. Nicely done. 3 3 |
 Euphro 4/13/10 . chapter 1First off, that's such a catchy and appropriate title. I have at least distantly known that title selection is, hmm, hard. Or harder for some, anyway, and I think you selected a fun one.
I really like what you've done with Tina's parents and with her mother in particular. I love that she's all flustered about the wedding (kind of like my mother for any family situation) and tries not to take it out on Tina.
"Artie wastes no time mouthing "Tina-Turner?" to me before addressing my father." That is absolutely hilarious. I can totally see it happening. The interaction between everyone is distinct but gives the reader a reasonable picture of what that scene must look like. Also, Artie, you're such a wise-ass. It strikes me as the bustle to get things together at the last minute before heading to an important event, and it plays out mostly smoothly (somewhat frazzled mother aside). I feel like I could look across the street and see the family over there going through the same thing. If that makes sense.
I look forward to reading more, as always 3 Great job! I'm glad you posted this one. |
 JustRelax 4/13/10 . chapter 1YES!
Hehe, it's cute already. I can't wait to see the hijinx that'll go on at the wedding.
That bit with Tina's dad and Artie is adorable.
The fact that they like Artie makes me squee. This is really cute. :) |
 ArboursGreen 4/13/10 . chapter 1I really like this so far and can't wait to read more! |
 ARPfics 4/13/10 . chapter 1Hey, it's justpurefiction from gleeforum. :D
This is so cute. I really need more Artie/Tina fluff in my life (and in actual canon, lol). 3 I would love to see more of this. |