 Afrodite 8/28/05 . chapter 1Vegeta at his "semetastic" best-both in the fic and in the Corner! How I enjoyed his line " NOW LEAVE ME ALONE TO BOIL IN CONTEMPT!"
Mirai's preoccupation with his hordes of valentines, and Yamcha's preoccupation with his own lack of valentines,was very amusing, too.
I was thankful to Mirai for pointing out to Goku that (1) Vegeta's currenty mushy disposition is his fault and that (2) Vegeta's creepy mushiness is similar to how Goku behaved toward the ouji on his first Valentine's day. |
 PerfectCell17 9/25/04 . chapter 4*giggles insanely* This has to be one of the funniest fics I've read! Man, it's pretty scary when Vegeta-sama can scare Kakarot! Wow, I even thought it was creepy, but it was cute! My favourite part was probably " Poker. " " Poker? "
" STRIP poker, Kakarrot. " *giggles again* That was priceless, Veggie and Kakay playing strip poker, atleast they didn't finish the final hand! Well, I'm off to read more of your hilariously awesome fics...if I don't end up waking someone up from my laughter... _ |
 SilentShadow007 12/5/03 . chapter 1Weird, but I like it. |
 Rentol 4/17/02 . chapter 4The Stage (somewhere)
Rentol: "Your story's are great!"
Goku: "Kinda creepy though."
Rentol: "Yeh, but there's always somehing weird in her stories."
Vegeta: "Stupid mush..."
Goku: "Love is only emotion that the brain creates."
[Rentol & Vegeta sweatdrop]
Rentol: "That was pretty smart!"
Goku: "Goku hungrey!"
Rentol: "I'm writing my own story where Goku & Veggie go camping & find gold and lets Veggie gets greedy." |
 Angelee 4/12/02 . chapter 4hehe, funny story! |
 Gaia Faye 4/9/02 . chapter 4Actually, even though it wasn't intended for Goku and Vejita to remain in mushy love, I think this story is still considered to be shonen ai. ::shrugs:: But anywho, I can't believe I forgot to finish reading this. x.o As usual, it was very funny, and it was an extra bonus for me since I'm a fan of shonen ai and yaoi. _ Vejjie was being a little creepy though. o_o I'm kinda glad things went back to normal. _;; Whelp, great job! ::goes to read other hilarious Chuquita stories:: |
 Mint Chips 3/6/02 . chapter 4ohmygod, LOL! |
 Ouji-Chan 2/24/02 . chapter 4::is one of those people that thought it was shounen ai:: heh heh ::smirks at the angry veggie:: "I" enjoyed this fic even more than your other ones Chu. Even if it wasn't intended to be the way I thought of it, a lot of your fics border on shounen ai standards though..o.o; don't stop writing that way though! It's fun to read Chi Chi and Vegeta fighting over "Kaky" all the time. |
 Nekoni 2/19/02 . chapter 4*sheepish grin* Whoops...
Your stories are funny! More people should read your stories! You are the Goddess of humour!
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I want more people to read your fics! They shooooould!
*reads it again*
Can't wake till the next fic! Writies moooooooore! |
 Gohanlover 2/19/02 . chapter 4 That was just adorably adorable! I love how Veggie made that lil card for Goku! I had a warm and mushy feelin' on the inside _ 'Course ... it don't last but ... I got caught up in the moment. I started to drool when you described the burgar ... lol Can't wait for the next story! |
 lostbook 2/18/02 . chapter 4 this is (in my opinion) one of the funniest that you have wrote! please dont stop writing them, your fics are great! pluss, i have absolutley zero succes finding another good humorDBZ author. |
 blah 2/18/02 . chapter 1 U suck |
 GohanLover 2/16/02 . chapter 3 Oh that was just too cool! I can't wait to see what happens to Poor Goku! Keep up the excellent work (Can't stress that enough) I wanna read the next chapter! D |
 TrueLion 2/14/02 . chapter 3Man, was that funny! It had a few close shaves of GROSSNESS but otherwise, wayyy cool! Oh man, just thinking about Vegeta and Goku... *shudders* ewwwwwwww. Yaoi is a kisama. :) Get crackin' on that soon, mk? Hope to see chap 4! |
 Nekoni 2/14/02 . chapter 3*drools - visibly*
Nice chapter! Nice chocolate!
*jumps back - glares and points and accusing finger at Chuquita*
YOU'RE TURNING YAOI-MATIC! You are! I can sense it... *not that I mind...very much* |