Sooooo cute! I love how you changed it from singing to acting, and i love how shuichi's always geting the girl parts. Cant wait for the next chapter, so update soon! : D

so amazing! i seriously cannot wait for the next update! please post soon!

so cute! PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!

LOVE! update soooon please :D

*spazzes out* OH THIS WAS SO AWESOME! XD! I absolutely *loved* this chapter- it had all the cuteness of Yuki/Shuichi along with some fantastic plot development as well. *hugs* I couldn't wait for an update, and this really didn't disappoint! I loved it, really loved it.

Firstly, the bit where Eiri was trying to get Shuichi to sleep with him was very funny- I laughed so much at the tipsy-Shuichi! But the romantic bits (especially all those lovely kisses!) were really cute, and I love how their relationship is developing. Very sweet!

And the bit in the theatre was awesome! Ryuichi remains fantastic (I'm such a Ryu fangirl! XD!) and you write him perfectly- I love how he just expects to get everything exactly how he wants it, and how Tohma humours him! I liked the way you had him as the one that got Shuichi involved in the auditions, that was a nice touch. And yay for Shuichi getting an audition! I'm so happy for him! ;D

Only one tip: at one point near the end you switched from calling Eiri 'Eiri' to 'Yuki'. I don't really mind which you choose, but changing it constantly tends to disrupt the flow of the story. Other than that I have no concrit!

Basically this was all wonderful, and I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a really great story, and your writing has such a flowing, readable quality to it. Totally addictive! All I want to do is read on! XD! Seeing the update alert for this in my inbox always cheers me up, so I can't wait for the next chappie! Well done! :D
Bookworm

yuki should believe in shuichi... that shuichi really like him...

I really, really love the idea behind this story! It's so adorable and I really hope you update soon. ;;

that was great! more soon please!

I love this! The dynamic between the boys is great and I like how everyone seems to be in character. Please write more, you're really good

nice story...

i like it...

update soon ok...

hm... seems like yuki still trying to convince himself that he has no interest in shuichi...

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT :D im hopeing that ur considering putting a bit of fluff and lime in at later chapters ;) cant wait for another update!

Much love

Capricorn2645

Yay! The romance is progressing! I love it- especially the bit where Eiri pinned Shuichi against the wall, definitely something he would do! I really like how he's agreed to help Shuichi out, and the conversation they had at the end was really good.

I also like the development of the other characters- the bits with Hiro/Ayaka and Tohma help the story along, and I like the dynamic they share with the two main characters. Well done on writing it!

Oh, and '"What about Hamlet?" Shuichi asked. Hiro shrugged.

"I don't see why not," Hiro said. "Trying to branch out of type casting, are we?"

"Hey! How is me playing a girl type casting?"' XD! I laughed so much at that line!

Great stuff, I'm really enjoying this story, and you're a very talented writer! :D

Bookworm

This has to be one of the best fics Ive ever read

D sorry for my crappy english (Im better at reading and listening xD)

I just love! how the love between them slowly grows up!

and not just a love at first sight

I love how Shu that has been in love with Hiro, slowly salowly start to fall in love with Eiri AND at the same time is still hurts with Hiro D is just! really real!

I, a reader, can feel it!

its not just! sazz! and they fall in love and the other forget about his previous love!

and I love how Eiri ogles at Shu

xD its just amazing!

because he is starting to like him, and at the time he eats him with his eyes!

3 love your fanfic!

please update ASAP!

I hope you are doing well

D

loved it! more soon please!