|Reviews for Ordinary|
| three notes 1/14/12 . chapter 17
Ahhhh, so sweet XD i read all of Ordinary to refreshen up. :) really liked this. Short and simple. Cute, too. Im assuming you had a fun time with the plantXD gud job, lexhra! And buena suerte to you ]
tres notas, le gusto
| Jay 3/6/11 . chapter 16
Eew... ooc Hibari ."
Hibird is cute though
| XxXKanbeki 12/31/10 . chapter 16
wheres the rest of it!
| Theturtlesketchbook 12/27/10 . chapter 16
Even though it was a short chap, It was cool and making me wanting more. I hope you finish the next chap soon!
| darksnow00 10/21/10 . chapter 16
That. Was. Short.
| music fans 10/20/10 . chapter 16
You finally update ! Hope you can update soon ! Hmmm..boxing compeition ? I thought its sumo-wrestling ! Cant wait for next chapter !
| Cassie M. M 10/20/10 . chapter 16
Whee! Battle for the rings! 8D.
| w-hiteromance 10/20/10 . chapter 16
Great chapter. I love Neri's personality! :D
| XxMichyBabyxX 8/31/10 . chapter 15
AWWWWW! Such a cute chapter! Write more soon!
| notusingthisaccounteveragain 8/22/10 . chapter 15
Ahh so cute, plz update more frequintly
| Cassie M. M 8/22/10 . chapter 15
XDDDDDD. Hibird... Glare... LOL. Also - LOVED this chappie. Yesh, Hibari-sama WAS OOC, with the blushing, but, eh... At the moment, I don't give a fuck. I just love that you updated, even though it was a bit short. 8P.
And hey, how do you know that everyone who reads this story is a girl? You said "you girls better feel lucky".
How do you know that no one is a boy? XD. I mean, yes, it probably IS rather unlikely for a boy to be wanting to read this, but... Who cares? XD. The point is, you shouldn't assume that EVERYONE is a boy.
Anyways, Imma shut up about that. Loved this chappie, and that Hibari-sama blushed... The image in my mind made me start laughing SOOOO hard. XD. Update ASAP, please!
| darksnow00 8/21/10 . chapter 15
...kyah kawaii No matter if Hibari's a bit OOC but I still love it... keep up the good work *thumbs up*
| Fairy Skull 8/20/10 . chapter 15
Awesome chapter my friend, Oh my Lanta Hibird starting to be more Hibari everyday...I dont know weather to be happy or frightend about that!
Agaian great job i cant wait for more! XD His tiny Herbivore,I love it!
| XxMichyBabyxX 7/31/10 . chapter 14
Good story so far!
But the chapters are so short! Could you maybe make them a bit longer?
| Namikaze Hatake 7/29/10 . chapter 8
Chapter 8- interaction a bit OOC but really cute! xD I squealed a bit while reading it . I'm a freak I know