Great story! Loved every minute of it!

Wow! I'd write a better review...but I can't catch my breath! Thanks!

Beth

I can't believe I never reviewed this story before - holy shit!

This was amazingly hot - and since I was looking for porn, all the better! :D Of course, now you've got me enticed to go read the rest of you fics...

Not that I'm complaining, mind

love it! glad it can stand without the story, which it did well. it also made me veeery interested in the story D

Definately hot!1XD

I really, really liked this story :) I thought it was cute and graphic and very Star Trek all at the same time. The only recommendation I have is to use less contractions when Pavel is speaking. He doesn't know English as well and usually speaks more formally.

But all in all very good writing 3

awww it was cute

...in that weird PWP-cute way o.o

really though, loved reading it, keep up thr writing :)

well, ahem, that was a...damn, I had to light a cigarette. If I had one, you would be getting a thank you note from my significant other.

Okay this is really good but wouldn't Sulu be the topper? I mean he's older but also bigger so...But like I said still awesome

This is glorious. You're a great writer. :)

dawww! The end was so sweet. This was my first time reading a Chekov/Sulu fanfic and I really enjoyed it! Rawr.

(also, before reading your profile, I had no idea that alright wasn't a word. I shall always remember that. Thank you.)

THIS HAS BEEN UP FOR FIVE DAYS AND I HAVE NOT READ IT.

This overlook on my part has been fixed.

J-jesus. That was. Just. Um.

Damn, that was REALLY hot. And awesomely explicit, especially for you :)

Just. Just. I have to tell you. bottom!Hikaru my favorite thing in the world. There is not enough of it in the world. I don't care if he _technically_ was on top.

And I'm adding you to my favorite authors list, just in case I haven't yet, which is ridiculous.

XOXOXO Daz

This was really cute. I got cracked up when Pavel used pet names, because I totally can't see him saying 'babe' lol, but the 'Karu thing was really cute.

I loved it!

Oh honey, I've been terrible lately with reviews and stuff (although I've been reading Sestina AND HOLY SHIT LOVING IT OH SO MUCH I promise to leave a decent comment as soon as I can), but this, this is so perfect and amazing and HAWT DAYUM and you are like the C/S GODDESS of FANFICTION! I am SERIOUS! *bows to you*

Also, PWP is awesome, you are so talented... *sigh*

Holy moly, Lyri! That was hot!

I'm speechless - not even able to think coherently anymore!

Even though this was a little PWP (only if you consider this as a stand-alone)it was written so beautifully! You're THE master of expressing feelings.

*sigh* so damn hot! Love you for writing that (ok always love you, but still, that was great!)