Interesting story so far. :)

this was good so far :) please write more :)

I like the possibilities of this plot. You have managed to weave it really well into the original storyline. Very nice. Please update soon.

this is a really good start. it seems like it's going to be an interesting story. i'm excited to see what you do with it! please update soon

Are you referring to Hermione or her mother? You mention twice in the first chapter to Mrs. Granger, and that could only be Hermione's mother.

You also mention that Lucius Malfoy has petitioned for Hermione ... don't you think his wife would have something to say about that!

You should check the time frame for your story. In January 2008 Hermione would be 28 years old and the Battle at Hogwarts took place 10 years previous in 1998.

I love Marriage Law stories ... but get it right.

please update soon

Great story!I can't wait to read more!Please please update soon!

please update soon

please update soon

This sounds like it is gonna be funny update soon :)

However old does she have to be to qualify for the Marriage Law? Even without the Time Turner she'd be twenty-eight in January 2008.

Im a bit confused...when does it takes place? I hope she is at least 20 years old and our of school (im sick of HG/SS fics in Hogwarts)

Also I dont know how it is possible that she doesnt know that Snape is spy for Order. That doesnt make sense. Order knows it. So does Trio since the end of 4th year.

But I like that neither Hermione or Snape are thrilled about being married :D i like slow development of reltionship.

But anyway,good start! And that dissapearance of Dumbledore was so in character that I had to laugh :D

I hope you will update soon.

O.O Update soon please? I like the approach you are taking in this marriage fic XD

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I like it! Please update soon. HGSS is one of my favorite pairings

Hi there! I think that marriage law is becoming a cliche, but your story has a good begining so I'm curious (a lot) to see how it developes. Keep writting!