  Aaron 6/1/10 . chapter 12 you need to finish what you started |
 ugty 2/27/10 . chapter 1I have not and most likely will not read this story but i'm writing this review to tell you that it is spelled ultimate not ultimet |
| Dark Angelic Kitty 2/6/05 . chapter 12 A very good fic! Keep updating. But please watch out for spelling. |
| schtroompf 3/19/04 . chapter 12 nice_ hope you get the next chapter done soon |
| lightcard 2/11/04 . chapter 12 you really have to update this story it's great so please add a new chaptor. |
| sk8erkay18 8/19/03 . chapter 12 sugoi! dat story was so kewl! yatta! i cant wait 4 da next chapter! |
| GAU28 7/10/03 . chapter 1 ARE U DEAD! sorry...i've just been waiting for a chapter for a long time so...well u know! u have to put up the next chapter soon! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
| SilverShadow 7/5/03 . chapter 12 WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED YET! I'VE BEEN REALLY PATCIENT WITH YOU AND NOW I'VE REACHED MY LIMIT! UPDATE REAL SOON OR ELSE!(no that is not a threat |
| Kia 5/15/03 . chapter 12 please update!this is an amazng story!btw who is Brad,Jamie,&Leon paired with. Do they even have a pair? |
| KiraIzazuma 2/8/03 . chapter 12 Cool. Write more soon. |
| Decker 1/19/03 . chapter 12 Now tell me this get continued right? this is a good piece of work, congratulations, kulats, kudos, i salute you sir, the like, i just read all there is so far. |
| Decker 1/19/03 . chapter 12 Now tell me this get continued right? this is a good piece of work, congratulations, kulats, kudos, i salute you sir, the like, i just read all there is so far. |
| Yamori 12/4/02 . chapter 12 great fic! I LOVE IT!
just one thing tho:
ch3k ur spe11ing pleez-lol!
Bit and Leena all the way!
-DBS chika |
| Amara Ligera 11/28/02 . chapter 12 Will you PLEASE update this story, ! |
| Kate 10/13/02 . chapter 12 u ass! please go on! |
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