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| Reviews for Give Up |
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   GrapeWhiz 4/30/12 . chapter 2Good plot carry on please. Check ya grammar before u um publish it |
| beck-iibabe 6/6/11 . chapter 2 Awesome |
| MzPearlz 2/25/11 . chapter 2 YAY but then again something a little harsher might be a lil bit more stress releaving x3 |
| MzPearlz 2/25/11 . chapter 1 instead of tryin to kiss him, shoulda slapped tha taste outta his mouth. how he gunna do that...and on her BIRTHDAY too..thats messed ups.. |
| ellyjane 10/5/10 . chapter 1 The grammar sucks. And it's all over the place. Write in proper sentences but nice plot. :D |
| MITHMITHMYTHMYTH 5/30/10 . chapter 1 Um, sorry, but the grammar sucks. But I like the plot and everything. Just work on the grammar. :) |
| Velvet Aura 5/17/10 . chapter 2 It's good. :) Please do write more. |
