This story is so amazing, I'm hooked! Its been so long since you last updated, I can only hope for more soon. Like über soon! I hope there is more E/P in the future. As well as interaction with Logan. Maybe you could continue on like what happens when they arrive back? I hope you update soon. Love this story. Can't wait for more!

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AH! Please, please, please tell me you plan on picking this story back up! It's fantastic!

Love this story-you write the team very authentically! Do you think you'll ever continue this one? Usually I don't like OC's, but I'm rather fond of Savannah, and I love the flashbacks! Hopefully some day you'll finish this!

awesome! i loved the prequel you did for this and am totally psyched to see the budding luvs that hardison has for eliot's sister. :)

I pressed the button. I'm writing a review. Please write more of this and more Eliot stories! We need to know why Sterling thought with even one damaged brain cell touching someone important to Eliot was even something to consider!

Great back story. Loved the first story of your 'verse with Savannah.

Totally cool! The entire story is almost like the show and would definitely fit Eliot's back story for what they've revealed on the show. Looking forward to the rest of this story.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful! I have loved every word of it! You do such a great job of keeping them in character!

I love how Hardison and Parker to respond to Eliot's murderous look. "Yep, ... somebody's gonna die!" That is totally what Parker would say!

poor eliot! loved savannah being all big and bad!

Wow. Intense. I love the part right before Eliot kicks down the door to the room Savannah is in - you had me holding my breath, scared stiff for what might have happened. Well written, well played. Another fantastic chapter.

Hey, hey, hey... There's a new chap today! \o/

Awful riming, I know... Kill me. lol

Loved the chap, hun... Really loved it.

The flashback was like aaaaaaaaaaw...

And I just can't get past the fact of how wrong their lifes were.

I hate that step fatehr of 'em and I don't like their mother very much either.

But anyway... It's amazing to see how close they were to each other and how much support they gave to each other... Eliot could take care of Sav but she took care of him too.

Loved every bit of it... I'm definetly waitin on the next.

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Whew! This is a great chapter!

Action and angst and Annie Croix. Can't ask for better!

Wow! Wow! Wow!

Did Eliot just got SHOT?

I know, I know you've posted this like a century ago but I hadn't been able to read it yet...

Man... That flashback hurt...Like... really

I mean, you can see it's all perfectly normal for them...

And THAT'S not normal... Children shouldn't live like that.

And Sophie? Yaaaaay, Sophie! She's awesome!

But I still can't believe Eliot got SHOT! O.O

I'll read the next one right now so you can post it. lol

Xx

I like this story a lot. You need to update and soon. Feels just like an episode would... It's never good when people make Eliot get personal.

How could I have thought letting this chapter sit for a few days was a good idea? My email just got so backed up ... but I'm here now. And that was VERY good. So do we get to see what's on the tape, pretty please? After Eliot saves Sophie, of course. Excellent chapter.