It's so sweet and cute and AWH! I love fifth grade Finn and Rachel.

I loved it. I found the Puck/Finn dynamic hilarious and esp at the end when you mention him lol. I thought Rachel's verbal punching of Jesse's suave attempts epic, it was so Rachel! You got Finn so well in character and it was awesome/.

I'm so glad I stumbled across this! This is so cute and clever and just /wonderful/. Your grammar isn't perfect, but your word choice in SO many places makes up for it.

"He doesn't say anything else because he isn't very smart, and he has this funny feeling that Miss Rachel Barbra Berry was very smart, and further more Puck is tugging on his arm, saying it was time to go see the railroad exhibit." - This flows really well and is such a cute characterization of Finn! Believable, too-I can see him having that kind of relationship with Puck back then, and it was so sweet to see his first ever interactions with Rachel and Quinn.

"He is much too nice, and maybe this is why Puck's name will be on Drizzle's birth certificate." - Clever on your part to throw this in-it's an interesting (and heartbreaking) touch.

"Finn thinks his eye is twitching." - Haha!

"(And he still finds it funny that as smooth an operator Puck is, Finn is still the one chatting up the most incredible girl in the world)." - Great ending, and again, I love how you characterize Finn in this line.

I loved the whole scene in the movie theater talking about Harmony shippers, by the way-I don't like Hermione with either boy, haha, but I thought it was adorable that Rachel would be that interested in Harry Potter and use it as a metaphor for her relationship with Finn. And Finn's, er, /excitement/ about such a minimal interaction with her was priceless.

Nicely done! Definitely a favorite.

Love this story :)

"He is much too nice, and maybe this is why Puck's name will be on Drizzle's birth certificate." Best. Line. Ever. That entire story was fabulous.

I-N-C-R-E-D-I-B-L-E !

LMFAO i love how the glee club all went on a big date together :)

amazing job

thanks for writing

keep up the great work

i love this story! so cute!