Heartbreaking. That's the only thing I can say. sobs

Oh wow! Not only is this little section of X and TB absolutely freaking fantastic and satisfies my inner fangirl (KYA...ahem). Your writing is fantastic also. You say you wrote these chapters a long time ago? Freaking fantastic! I'm off to read some more of your work! geez look at me im speaking in exclamation marks! LOL *added to Fav Authors*

wox! Pretty amazing, especially the first chapter!

I enjoyed your fanfic!

Poo Subaru... *sigh* Seishirou and him are sado-masochist, nothing to say...

Well, hipe I'll read you in a next time!

Okay... this, made me cry. It's so beautiful. And I fully agree with you. I'm possitive that what Seishirou was trying to say as he died was "I love you." This really was amaizing well written, and aside from the emotional bit... Very true to Seishirou. And Subaru was beyond in character. You've really got them down. *claps* I applaude you for a job wonderfully done!

O.O THERE'S A SEQUEL? ::runs so fast to get to the sequel she steps on peoples heads::

;_;
::pulls out kleenex:: That was so good and so sad! Poor Subaru-chan. I think he needs a hug n.n ::Evil Fuuma walks in with a big smile:: No not you Fuuma! Fuuma: *pouts* Why not? Subaru: O.O Because you're trying to kill us all! Fuuma: Well if you just work around that little fact I'm sure we could have a wonderful relationship Subaru: ...

I love this fanfic. :-)

Especially the first part, which is sad, and so cruel, and... I don't know how to say, but there is more horrors and less simple tears than in the second part. It has more strength. And in the second one, Seishirou is a little too nice. Oh, I think he really loves Subaru! But I don't think he could feel remorse for the others things he'd done. Being an assassin, all this. But it's just a question of point of view! You are not OOC, that's not what I say!

The part abour the christianism bothered me a little. I never viewed these charas with a christian culture. I have absolutely nothing about christian themes (oh my Karen, I love you!), I just think it does not suits well onmyojis.

I loved this. I loved the detail and the use of language; you got it spot on! You captured the mental torment of Subaru perfectly...and Seishiro? fwe! He's perfectly evil _

Well done!

beautiful...I don't know what else to say, but wow.

Wellll...this story has been a favorite of mine for a long time, but I'd thought I'd review again seeing as though today is Seishirou-San's birthday! Yay for November 22nd! I love this fic so much! _

Happy Birthday, Sei-chan! (You wouldv'e been 36, if CLAMP hadn't have killed you off..;_;)

Fave part-beginning of it where he's apologizing, sort of. This was so heart-wrenching! I have to be more weary of your angsty fanfics, Anne! But I love this story.. I really did. In fact, I'm heading off to read the sequel right now.

damn, this was so good...

i can only hope to be as good as you!

I spesialize in angst, too and absolutely love sei-chan and subaru together... i think they are the best anime/manga couple ever created, no really...

you have an immense talent... you write about feelings so thoroughly... so beautifully true... i really like your writing, that i do! .

So, keep up the good work :P

please write more and give it a happy ending ;_; ::add this story as fave:: i love it, even tho it made my heart ache

Is this the end?No...write more onegai!

Wow. The term "great" holds no satisfaction when trying to describe how good, how awesome this fanfic was. Your story was beyond great. Keep up the good work :)