This is a really good beginning. I love it. There really aren't enough Genbu stories.

In your first AN, you said that you were looking for some good Genbu fics. Well, some of my favorites are Genbu no Miko: A Winter's Tale by Eulene, Stars of Hope and Destiny by juufan, Through the Northland Snows by Tamara Joy, and Together... by Kaze-chan. They're really good. I'm also writing a Genbu stroy called The Genbu Story, but that isn't good like these ones.

Anyway, this is a incredible beginning. I do hope that you continue it soon. I just love it.

Marvelous. Simply Marvelous. You're right about the Gembu stories- please continue yours. I'm serious. It's just great!

OMG! Ch.1 was...wonderful! Fantastic. I, too, think that the Genbu seishi & miko are fascinating. I'm so happy to have discoverd your story. Please continue with the excellent writing!

Hey! I love the Genbu Seishi! Please write more...I read waaaaay too many fanfics about them! I need to hear more of this one! ^-^ I write for Uruki on Genbu no Shijin Tenchi Sho (now just called Genbu RPG) so I think about this kind of thing a lot. So- keep up the good work! ^-^ -N.K. (who tells people the name of the girlfriend he'll never really have is Takiko)

Yay! It's very good. ^_^ I like it a lot. I've never been huge on Genbu and/or Byakko fics, but I like this one. ^_^ Please R&R my fics. *tragic sigh* Nobody else seems to want to. Could you...please?

I like your beginning! Can't wait for more!!!

continue! we need more Genbu fics!!!! ^_^