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| Kathy the Great 2002-12-28 ch 3, | abuseAhh! Update! And be quick about it! This story is very good methinks! |
| Legend 2002-02-10 ch 3, | abusePlease continue to review people! Chapter 3 is on it's way! |
| Yuffie143 2002-02-08 ch 3, | abuseThis story was written very well. Your characterization is pretty good too! Keep writing |
| Scarbie 2002-02-07 ch 3, | abuseThis story is very interesting. Your description of the aeon battle was very detailed. I hope you continue. |
| Legend 2002-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThanks for reviewing! Yes, I printed out myself a copy of my work and found these errors. They annoy me as much as those who edit writing. I will try to fix all I found! Continue to Review! |
| Yuffie143 2002-02-07 ch 1, | abuseHmmm interesting...*waits for next chapt* |
| miriya v. 2002-02-07 ch 1, | abuseHmm...this has a good start. ^_^ I like the way you've written it, though there are a few tense errors and sentences that last just a bit too long -- easily fixed, though. ^_^ I would like to see where you take this -- I hope you continue. |
| Syvia 2002-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse*grins* I enjoyed it. Please, keep going. |