This is really good

That was good. If Ben and Locke's scene outside the church hadn't been so awesome, I would have wanted something like that to happen. And I enjoyed the pun.

Awww. This was sweet, if I may call it that. What a nice idea. :) And it was really well written as always. ;) I like how it's Hurley who provides closure, sort of-and I like how even though we don't hear John speak, we certainly get a sense of how he's feeling, and how he might be speaking to Hurley.

:( Nice little scene. I could see it all in my head. I wish the real Locke was still alive, if only because Ben and Locke always had such wonderful scenes together... -sigh-

Good writing. The only thing that jarred me a little was Jack calling Hurley "Hugo". At least I think it was Jack talking then... :)

You beat me to this! But I'm actually glad since my writing is no where near as polished as yours.

Another great piece. The pacing was lightning fast but it delivered like one as well. If you do plan on continuing this, I'll eagerly read it. I adored the ending, awesome job!

I really liked it! Everyone's voice was so authentic...if your scene really happens on LOST, I'll probably cry.