I really like this poem. It feels very true to both Quatre's character and the things he's been through in the series and EW, and like something he might actually write. You've got a good grasp of how the boy works, in my opinion, which really enhances the poem. Speaking of the poem, technically, I think it's a very well written poem, nice and tight, and the rhyme scheme really works very well, helping to create a rhythm (sorry about my lack of spelling ability; I hope you can still tell what I mean) that flows and carries the reader along with it, off into the depths of Quatre's mind. From a fellow poet (though I've only got fics posted at the moment), good job and keep writing.